As always, brilliant, Caz! Like many others have said, I enjoy seeing Josh/Donna through other people's eyes. Loved the Sam and Lou parts in particular, but they were all great.

Favorite description: "It was almost as though Josh hadn’t progressed beyond elementary school in the relationship department and was stuck at the stage of making fun of the girl he liked."

This is one of the best sentences I've ever read, describing Josh's utter ineptness when it came to his affection for Donna.

Well done! Can't wait for the next two!