Speaking of predictable… the first good fic to appear on the Yahell list and its Caz fic. Figures.
So very sweet. I just wish we would have seen a little more of them as a settled couple instead of that brief (but silent) moment from “Tomorrow”. I really missed the banter. And your story/dialog seemed true to the characters we all loved to watch on tv.
I loved Donna’s thoughts about how Josh remembered the little things. Of course he remembered those things… those are the things that make him like her. Sweet Josh is probably my favorite. He may appear to be gruff on the outside, but underneath he really is a softy to those he cares about.
Lastly…I LOVED this: “I don’t know, I think Toby and I would make a cute couple.” “If you could keep from killing each other.”
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Date: 2007-03-13 12:56 am (UTC)So very sweet. I just wish we would have seen a little more of them as a settled couple instead of that brief (but silent) moment from “Tomorrow”. I really missed the banter. And your story/dialog seemed true to the characters we all loved to watch on tv.
I loved Donna’s thoughts about how Josh remembered the little things. Of course he remembered those things… those are the things that make him like her. Sweet Josh is probably my favorite. He may appear to be gruff on the outside, but underneath he really is a softy to those he cares about.
Lastly…I LOVED this: “I don’t know, I think Toby and I would make a cute couple.”
“If you could keep from killing each other.”