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Here’s a little something written for [livejournal.com profile] ww_renaissance, where we’ve been re-watching In the Shadow of Two Gunmen.

Usual disclaimers – These guys ain’t mine (and oh, how I hate having to say that about Josh!) – they’re Aaron’s.

Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] christinekh for the read through.







Syntactical Pedantry





“So,” Josh said as he handed Sam a beer. “I got a new assistant today.”

Sam frowned as he looked up from his reading. “A new - ?” He took the proffered bottle. “Did you have an old assistant?”

Josh paused for a split second before flopping down into his chair. “Funny.”

“No, seriously. To have a ‘new’ something, you have to have had an ‘old’ something otherwise the ‘new’ is redundant.”

“Sam.”

“And I don’t recall your having an ‘old’ assistant, ergo, it stands to reason that you can’t have a ‘new’ one. Is all I’m saying.”

Josh took a swig of beer and found, to Sam’s amazement, space on his incredibly messy desk to put up his feet.

“I can’t believe I forgot how pedantic you can be at times.”

“It’s not pedantry. It’s good syntax.”

“Whatever; it’s still dork-like.”

Sam shrugged and settled back to the draft he was annotating. “It’s why I’m paid to write and you’re not.”

Josh made a noise that sounded suspiciously like ‘hmpf’ before he leaned back in his chair and took another drink while Sam continued to read and scribble notes.

The silence lasted less than a minute.

“Remind me again why you’re in here?”

Sam sighed and looked up. “Because Toby’s trying to finish the new speech.”

“And he doesn’t need you for that?”

“I’d prefer not to be within throwing distance.”

“Huh?”

“According to him, my sentences are too long and – you know, he has serious issues with punctuation.”

Josh snorted. “One can have serious issues with punctuation?”

“Toby can.”

Josh rolled his beer bottle between his hands. “He’s okay, Sam, really. Well actually,” he scratched the back of his head, “no, he can be a real son of a bitch, but it’ll be fine once you get to - ”

Sam waved a hand. “Yeah.” Then he flipped shut the pad he’d been using and dropped it to the floor. “So, you were saying,” he began, taking a swig of his beer.

“Hm?”

“About this new assistant of yours.”

Josh smirked. “The one I can’t have because I didn’t have an old one?”

Sam opened his mouth to speak – and paused. Then he said resignedly, “This assistant of yours then.”

“What about her?”

“She’s not that really scary woman with the crazy hair that came in here with the bag of knitted Bartlet for America hats is she?”

“What? No.” Josh’s expression changed suddenly to one of bewilderment. “Hang on. Someone came in here with a bag of hats?”

“Yeah. You should have seen CJ’s face. The woman wouldn’t leave until someone had tried one on.”

Josh chuckled and Sam grinned back. “I told CJ I thought she looked cute in it, but I don’t think she appreciated the compliment.”

“No?”

“Well, she hit me with it.”

“Ah, then I guess you were right.”

Sam nodded and took another drink. “Anyway. This - assistant.”

“Oh, yeah.” Josh leaned back in his chair, a huge smile spreading across his face. “I walked in here this afternoon and found her answering my phone. You know,” he snickered, “she tried to tell me she was assigned to me – but then admitted she wasn’t; told me she was a PoliSci graduate – then admitted she wasn’t; tried to convince me her boyfriend hadn’t dumped her after she’d paid his way through medical school and – what?”

Sam was staring at him, looking more than slightly horrified. “This is the assistant? God, Josh, I think you’d have been better off with the scary woman with the hats.”

Josh swung his feet down, still chuckling as he pulled himself into his desk. “Oh, that’s not the half of it. She had five majors and two minors in two years, dropped out of college to support the freeloading boyfriend - ”

Sam leaned forward. “Josh,” he said, emphatically. “You’re not serious. Really. You didn’t just hire some woman who walked in off the street?”

Josh blinked at him mid-swig. “See,” he set the bottle down. “Here’s the thing. I didn’t actually … I mean, she sort of hired… Sam, she’s - ”

Sam shook his head. “Oh, God.”

“What?”

“You’re a bit young for this, but I guess…”

Josh frowned. “Young for what? What are you talking about?”

“Well, sometimes, as men approach middle-age - ”

“Hey! I’m not - ”

“Yeah, well, like I said, it’s a bit early for a mid-life crisis, but not out of the question.”

“You sure you’re not a woman? Or, you know, my mother?”

“I’m just sayin’ – maybe your judgement was swayed by the fact she’s…”

“She’s what?”

Sam sank back into his seat. “I don’t know. Unless… wait. She’s not that blonde I saw packing those boxes outside earlier?”

Josh nodded. “So?”

“Josh.” Sam sighed, exasperatedly. “Seriously, you haven’t - ”

“Haven’t what?”

“Hired a girl because she’s…”

“A girl?”

“Well, yes, and because she’s…”

“Blonde? Pretty? What?”

“All of the above!”

“No.”

“No?”

“No,” Josh insisted firmly.

“So let me get this straight.” Sam leaned forward. “You hired an assistant.”

“Well, the who hired whom is debatable, but for the sake of argument, yes I did.”

“Okay. And you didn’t ask for an assistant and she wasn’t assigned to you.”

“No. Although,” Josh waved his hand around the tiny, cluttered room. “It’s not as though I don’t need one.”

“That, while true, is beside the point.”

“’kay.”

Sam frowned at Josh’s barely disguised amusement. “So this assistant – who you did not request, and who was not assigned to you – walked into your office, answered your phone and talked you into giving her a job.”

“Basically?” Josh shrugged. “Yes.”

“You’re an idiot.”

“So many have said.”

Sam raised an eyebrow. “Does Leo know?”

“Yes.”

“And he’s okay with it?”

“He’s fine. And in any case, she’s a volunteer.”

“She’s going to put up with you and not get paid for it?”

Josh sat up, indignantly. “I’m not that bad.”

“You’ll drive her nuts within a month.”

“Oh, thanks. With friends like you…”

Sam smiled. “All part of the service.”

“But Sam, the thing is ...” Josh said, his manner suddenly serious. “There’s just… I don’t know. I mean, she drove here from Wisconsin because she wanted to be part of this. She saw the Governor on TV and wanted to do something to help. And she just got in her car and drove a thousand miles. That takes - guts or … something.”

Sam eyed him suspiciously.

“Anyway,” Josh sniffed, “she’s already figured out my filing system and has threatened to change it -”

“You have a filing system?”

“I think that’s the change she’s planning on.”

“Ah.”

“And she’s organized my calendar, packed all the files we’re going to need in Charleston - ”

“We?”

“Huh?”

“She’s coming to Charleston?”

“Yeah. There’ll be plenty for her to do, and I think she’ll be,” he paused, the ghost of a smile on his face. “Valuable.”

Sam picked up his pad, stood up and stretched. “I hope you know what you’re doing.”

“She’s a nice kid, Sam,” Josh said softly, looking up. “And I just thought…” he pursed his lips and shrugged. “I thought she deserved a chance.”

Sam smiled and nodded. “Okay.” He sighed. “Well. I’d better go see how Toby’s doing.”

Josh leaned back and quirked an eyebrow. “If he throws stuff at you give him a hat.”

“Yeah,” Sam rolled his eyes. “‘cause that’ll really help things along.” He turned to leave. “Thanks for the beer.”

“No problem.” Josh inclined his chin. “Oh, and Sam?” he called after his friend as he left the room. “You really don’t need to worry. When have you ever known me to go for blondes?”




End.

Date: 2008-03-27 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zommbie1.livejournal.com
Oh it is wonderful! I can totally see the conversation going that way! Not to mention CJ and the hats. Perfect.

Date: 2008-03-27 11:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks, Zomm! Those lines of Josh and Donna's - "I'm your new assistant." "Did I have an old assistant?" sort of stuck in my head and then turned into this.

Glad you liked it.

Date: 2008-03-27 11:09 pm (UTC)
kathyh: (Kathyh WW Josh smile)
From: [personal profile] kathyh
LOL. Excellent. Great dialogue. I felt as if I was eavesdropping on Josh and Sam :)

Date: 2008-03-27 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks very much! I've not written Sam before, so I'm glad it worked for you :)

Date: 2008-03-27 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuesday-suit.livejournal.com
“According to him, my sentences are too long and – you know, he has serious issues with punctuation.”

Of course I thought immediately of:

"....Anytime you wanted to use punctuation, that'd be fine." ;-)

“What? No.” Josh’s expression changed suddenly to one of bewilderment. “Hang on. Someone came in here with a bag of hats?”

BWAH! Was it Big Block of Cheese Day? ;-) I wonder if CJ liked those hats better than the Notre Dame one Jed made her wear on the plane?

“Well, yes, and because she’s…”

“Blonde? Pretty? What?”


Hee. At least she wasn't a leggy Republican.

And this:

“You have a filing system?”

“I think that’s the change she’s planning on.”


Made me laugh out loud.

Wonderful stuff, as always, love. :-)

Date: 2008-03-27 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Of course I thought immediately of:

"....Anytime you wanted to use punctuation, that'd be fine."


Then my work here is done ;-)

Thanks, Tues, I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2008-03-27 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flippet.livejournal.com
Sweet. Sweetsweetsweet.

This has just exactly the right tone to it. I could picture everything. And there's no anvil, per se...Josh really means what he's saying. And Sam's voice is great.

Love it. :-)

Date: 2008-03-27 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks very much! I've not written Sam before, so that's good to know!

This grabbed me the other night when I was posting the picspam - the "Did I have an old assistant?" line was just too good a peg!

Glad you enjoyed it.

More next week!

Date: 2008-03-27 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miraxcorran.livejournal.com
Brilliant. Josh? Mid-life crisis? The whole idea had me laughing out loud.

Date: 2008-03-27 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you liked it :-)

Date: 2008-03-27 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gatsbyfan.livejournal.com
When have you ever known me to go for blondes?
Hee.

So very cute. I knew you had Josh and Donna's voices down, but Sam too? Look at you. I loved it.

Date: 2008-03-28 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thank you! I've not written Sam before, so I'm dead chuffed you think I've got him right :-)

Date: 2008-03-28 12:06 am (UTC)
hooloovoo_42: (Sam & Josh)
From: [personal profile] hooloovoo_42
I'm still laughing. That was brilliant. Absolutely spot on with the Josh & Sam bantering. I loved the hats!

Can't wait for next week :-)

Date: 2008-03-28 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks! I just had the new/old assistant thing in my head and then this happened!

I guess I'd better finish next week's now, huh?

Date: 2008-03-28 12:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinke.livejournal.com
You already know I liked it - it's made me smile yet again and is the perfect end to a long day.

Oh, Josh. I think even then he knew. *g*

Date: 2008-03-28 12:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
I'm glad :-)

And I like to think Josh knew - something - had happened even if he didn't know what it was!

Date: 2008-03-28 12:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bekkis.livejournal.com
Hee! This was so great! I can picture the boys having this exact conversation too; perfect Sam and Josh voices:)

Date: 2008-03-28 12:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)

Date: 2008-03-28 12:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] foreverdreaming.livejournal.com
yay for lee mead and good fic in one night! (just got back from Joseph. *le sigh*)

Date: 2008-03-28 12:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Nice :-)

And thanks for reading - glad you liked it. More next week!

Date: 2008-03-28 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassandra-w.livejournal.com
Another great fic from you, Caz!

Date: 2008-03-28 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading, Kass, glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-03-28 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassandra-w.livejournal.com
You're welcome!

Date: 2008-03-28 01:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] morethanexist.livejournal.com
Awesome fic. Very cute and spot on dialoge. Love.

Date: 2008-03-28 03:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks very much!

Date: 2008-03-28 02:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] litterthisheart.livejournal.com
“Well, the who hired whom is debatable, but for the sake of argument, yes I did.”
I love this line so much. That is so their relationship in one convenient little sentence!

You write incredible dialogue- natural, in character, utterly believable. I think Mr. Sorkin himself would be proud.

Date: 2008-03-28 03:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thank you so much - that's very kind. I'm glad you liked it :-)

Date: 2008-03-28 02:09 am (UTC)
ext_2188: Rodney McKay solemnly swears he is up to no good (wiseass)
From: [identity profile] lurkmuch.livejournal.com
“You sure you’re not a woman? Or, you know, my mother?” HEE.

Lovely, as usual. Perfect Sam and Josh banter!

Date: 2008-03-28 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks very much. I didn't intend to write it, but the "did I have an old assistant?" line got stuck in my head when I was rewatching and wouldn't leave me alone!

Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2008-03-28 02:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mcgarrygirl78.livejournal.com
I like this. While I dont usually peruse the Josh/Donna aisle, this was very enjoyable. Sam was adorable and I could deinfitely see the two of them having a conversation exactly like that. Great characterization.

Date: 2008-03-28 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks! I know you're not a JD person, so I appreciate the fact you read it and took the time to comment :-)

Glad you liked it.

Date: 2008-03-28 11:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] segsig.livejournal.com
You've never done Sam before! You found his voice. Your fics end up confusing me because all the voices are so right, I end up thinking that I remember something like this happening.

Date: 2008-03-28 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Nope, I've not written Sam before. I'm always anxious about attempting the characters I've not "done" before, so I'm really pleased you thought I got him right.

Thanks for reading - oh, and I'll be posting a longer J/D fic next week :)

Date: 2008-03-28 06:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anatolealice.livejournal.com
I loved it Cazzy! You got Sam perfectly, I can see him sitting there in a perfectly ironed shirt. And Josh was completely Josh. Hehehehe, I have issues with punctuation too:-) I can totally see this scene. If the world were a better place, it'd be on my season 2 extras, right?

Date: 2008-03-28 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thank you for the kind wordsAna! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And let's face it, if I was writing them, the DVD extras would be a lot more pornographic ;-)!!

Date: 2008-04-01 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurenba.livejournal.com
And let's face it, if I was writing them, the DVD extras would be a lot more pornographic

and that's only one of the reasons why we love you, caz.

Date: 2008-04-01 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Hee ! :D

Date: 2008-03-30 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] leli-5.livejournal.com
That was great. Perfect tone for that conversation. It's just as I would have imagined it. You're Sam was spot-on, but you know I expected nothing less.

“Okay. And you didn’t ask for an assistant and she wasn’t assigned to you.”

That part in particular, where he keeps repeating the information to make sure he's got a handle on what's happening, was excellent.

Also, can I say - damn your ability to find the perfect ending!!! You rock. I suck. I suck over here, alone, in awe of your ability to rock.

Looking forward to next week...

Date: 2008-03-30 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thank you - I'm glad you liked it and that Sam sounded right. I'm always a bit nervous when I write someone "new".

As for endings, sometimes they come to me before I've even started! And sometimes - as now - they don't. Meh - I'll get there...

Date: 2008-03-31 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the_antichris.livejournal.com
This is fabulous! I can totally picture it.

Date: 2008-03-31 08:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks very much - glad you liked it. :-)

Date: 2008-04-01 04:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laurenba.livejournal.com
Caz, you've done it again. I feel like every time I write a comment on your fic I use the word "spot-on" but your dialogue, your characterization, is just so...spot-on!

runs to get a thesaurus

I can completely see this. and this line (besides all the ones that have been quoted above) just was so right:

Sam smiled and nodded. “Okay.” He sighed. “Well. I’d better go see how Toby’s doing.”

Josh leaned back and quirked an eyebrow. “If he throws stuff at you give him a hat.”

“Yeah,” Sam rolled his eyes. “‘cause that’ll really help things along.”


Much love.

Date: 2008-04-01 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Thanks Lauren - I'm really glad you liked it.

And I just posted something really silly (http://caz963.livejournal.com/139366.html) for April Fool's Day :-)

Date: 2008-04-12 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crossmymind.livejournal.com
LOVES THEM.

You know, earlier I kept thinking about them going to Charleston and had this random scene in my head of Josh and Donna. I could just see them walking around downtown trying to find somewhere to get coffee, since you know, I live here. If I thought I could write worth a damn, I'd give it a shot, but no way.

Date: 2008-04-12 03:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Glad you liked:)

I could just see them walking around downtown trying to find somewhere to get coffee

Heh - send me a list of where you want them to go, and a map, and I'll see what I can do!

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